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Stunty
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PostSubject: Cracking stuff!!   Thu Jun 21, 2012 7:46 am

As you well know, I love this. The idea behind it, the way you made Emily and Naomi work through a solid friendship first before reuniting,

And the scary shit. Yeah. That works too affraid

You've never really explained ALL of it though have you? lol. I suspect there's a huge reason for that...? Very Happy

The final scene of the house resetting itself is still kinda chilling....

Awesome work mate, awesome work

And welcome to the dark side. We have cookies and nice people over here Very Happy
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PostSubject: Excellent and creepy   Sat Oct 20, 2012 10:47 pm

Hi

Just wanted to add my praise. Made me shiver and blush all in one minute. Lovely build up and you could feel the tension all through. Nice bit of spirit inspired Naomily naked passion, which at least had the effect of metaphorically banging their heads together. FFS, friends?? This is a romance written in the stars.. ha ha

I liked the ending, in the best horror - 'here we go again'- style. Reading the next one now. Keep up the good work. This site is awesome!
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